Rajee ji mere Bade bhai,
Mujhe khushi hai ki aapko yeh rachna chhoo gai.Aapko ek baat bataun maine jo 20 saal pehle aankho se dekha aaj wahi kalam sey uker diya bhav to dalna tha par maine mulbhut aatma ko nahin chheda. Thanks a Ton for your comments.

Dear Amit,
  Wow! what a great literary gem from your  pen---the one who has seen this life in my childhood---the one who is a farmer's son----it is agreat emotional self identification. 
   I was carried away--I remember those days---LASSI--MAKKI KI ROTI--SHIKHAR DOPAHAR-AAM KAA BAGICHA---KHETO MEY 'NAANA' KE SAATH HAL JOTNA---50 SAAL PURANI HAI YEH BAATEN---MAGAR AAPNE TAAZA KAR DI AAZ--NA  TO NAANA HI HAI---NA WOH AAM KA BAGICHAA--NA WOH HUL---CAARON KE JHURMAT MEY---CONCRETE KE JUNGLE MEY--SAMAY KE BAHAAV MEY KHO GAYA HAI WOH PIYAARA SA BACHPAN---SACHCHAA---SAADDAA---AUR IMAAN KA---IS JHOOTHE --KROOR--BEIMAAN WAQT KI HAWAYON SE BILKUL BHINN.
   I Would have missed due to this damn net Problem in Chandigarh for last 10 days---------I just came to a cafe and saw your page---------what a GEM I found. Thanks Amit. Regards. Rajee.

Dear opulence,

Thanks for your kind visit and comments.

Writer,

I just got the meaning of the poem. Wonderful! Good take on the contest. All the very best !
Cheers,
Opulence.

Dear womanslove,

Thanks for your lovely comments.

 That is absolutely beautiful the imagery is breathtaking

Dear sablu,

Thanks very much. Aap pehle apne comments dey ya baad mein wo mere liye anmol hain kyonki aap ek behatrin kalakar hain. Take care. God bless you.

Aram bhai,

Mujhe khushi hai ki aapko mere prayaas achchha laga , aap khud bahut hi achchhe lekhak hain aapka protsahan paakar mujhe achchha laga. Thanks a Ton.

Heart-Bhai,

Pranam

Maaf karma mein bahut der se comment bhej raha hoon. Actually I was not on on-line for past two days since Fri evening so today itself I read your kavita and was highly impressed to read it’s contents. Bahut hi khubsurati se aapne rachna ki hai. Aap ke kalpanaoon ka jawab nahin. But yes in practical life such expectation hurt us when it is not accomplished by our sweet-heart.

Pesh karta hoon

Tera saath hai to

Mujhe kya kami hai

Andheron se bhi mil rahi roshani hai

Cheers!

Mukesh

Dear writer at heart,
Kya khoobsoorat kavita likhi hai aapne....
I loved it.....
fabulous... 

aram